REFLECTIONS BY IBA

PAUSE . BREATHE . EXHALE .

Fading

And she fades
into the sunset –
no, even beyond the sunset,
where the sun
cannot pierce with its blinding light,
where storms cannot reach her,
though she can still hear thunder’s roar.

Where hearts do not bleed
and minds do not clutter,
where she found the freedom
to simply be –
unbound by norms and society,
liberated even from herself.

She fades,
and in fading,
became forever free.

14 responses to “Fading”

  1. Wow, so simple, yet so deep! Beautifully penned✍️

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      1. Always my pleasure 😇

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  2. Fade into you

    Sending good vibes from the mountain and the desert

    To the abode in the clouds

    Hope you are in that happy place in your mind.

    Even though you say you don’t remember it today 😊

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    1. Good morning Lance.

      It rained again in the early hours, must be your good vibes.

      I hope the clouds are staying put for you there.

      Let’s just say, somewhere over the rainbow, Way up high

      There’s a land that I heard of once in a lullaby…

      Thankyou for the good vibes Lance.

      Have a lovely night 🌙

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  3. This is moving — the way you write fading not as an ending, but as a becoming. Sometimes we think fading means losing, yet here it feels like freedom — shedding weight, shedding noise, shedding all that binds. The past doesn’t vanish, it becomes the ground beneath us, the echo that reminds us of who we were as we step into who we are. Your words show me that fading isn’t weakness, it’s transformation — a quiet strength that carries us beyond the storm, into light.

    She fades,
    yet in the fading
    a fire glows—
    not gone,
    but becoming.

    In your fading i find a reflection of my own

    She fades,
    and in the fading
    I see the seed of new light.
    The past still whispers,
    but its roots now nourish
    what is yet to come.

    She fades,
    yet her essence lingers —
    not as shadow,
    but as soil,
    from which tomorrow
    will bloom

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    1. You should make a collection of your poetry too.

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      1. nah – I have started putting it on Insta – its best that way – I ain’t no writer – when you comment – I go and read it again and I wonder bloody hell did I write that ….. no way ……….

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  4. I love the freedom to simply be, Iba. Wonderful thoughts and poem. Happy weekend!

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    1. Thankyou Hazel. It’s a rainy morning here. Have a lovely Saturday!

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      1. Love and gratitude, Iba. It’s cloudy here. Take care.

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  5. “Where hearts do not bleed
    and minds do not clutter”
    Wonderful 👍

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